Narrative Writing - Unit 1 Review

Front

Rewrite: Sam yells, let's go to the park!

Back

Sam yells, "Let's go to the park!"

Front

Rewrite: "I want ice cream too, she said, "but we need to ask mom."

Back

"I want ice cream too, " she said, "but we need to ask mom."

Front

Rewrite: I wanted to hangout with my friends but I don't have time until this weekend.

Back

I want to handout with my friends, but I don't have time until this weekend.

Front

Rewrite for WORD CHOICE: Chocolate cupcakes are better than alright.

Back

Chocolate cupcakes are great in my opinion.

Front

Rewrite for clarity: Sometimes we forget to submit something, though it only happens occasionally.

Back

Sometimes we forget to submit something, though that happens only occasionally.

Front

Edit to add detail: Jason has always been a great soccer player, even when it was challenging.

Back

Jason has always been a great soccer player, pushing himself to be the best at practice, even when it was challenging.

Front

Best punctuation for: Kelsey had to get her homework done tonight or she would not be able to go to her friend's house.

Back

Kelsey had to get her homework done tonight, or she would not be able to go to her friend's house.

Front

Macy plans a birthday surprise for her mom with pizza and cake, inviting family and friends. What prewriting ideas likely led to this?

Back

Mom loves surprises, order food, invite guests, get present

Front

Best revision for clarity: I think music is a great way to take your mind off of things and relax.

Back

I think music is a great way to take your mind off of things and relax.

Front

Purpose of the passage: Hank studied hard, read notes, asked for help, and believed in himself.

Back

To explain what Hank had to do to do well in school.