Creative Writing: How can I make it experimental?

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Experimenting with punctuation helps portray a character's struggle.

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Portraying the struggle of a character.

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Experimenting with punctuation situations:

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When someone is mentally trapped/contained.

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Autopsy report?

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A report of someone who has died and their body is being investigated.

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Age of the boy in 'More Than This'?

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Nearly seventeen

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Importance of 'nearly' seventeen?

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More emotionally traumatic; he may not reach his 17th birthday.

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Commas in writing represent:

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The waves and the half breaths.