ECR- essay review

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Give title and main idea (background info).

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[In the article "Hurricanes, Cyclones, and Typhoons," Lillian Steenblik Hwang explains how these storms form and the dangers they pose to communities.]

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On topic - make sure you answer the question by restating and giving 2 answers to stick to the topic/prompt.

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[ Two ways that hurricanes can impact people and their communities are causing crippling damage to people's property and their city and by having to make them relocate/ evacuate their home they so very much love. ]

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Restate the question - helps you not go off topic and stick to the prompt question and answer the first answer on the 'O'.

[First of all,  one way that hurricanes can impact people who are on the path of a hurricane is by wreaking havoc on communities from severe property damage due to their incredibly strong winds and flooding.]

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Cite the evidence that proves your answer.

[ For example, in paragraph 12, the author states, "Steady winds and even higher gusts can blow down electric-power lines, upend trees, and toss debris through the air." ]

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Explain your evidence like a teacher would - what are your inferences/conclusions from the evidence you provided? What is the overall effect or end result? Use DAWUBIES.

[  Clearly, this indicates that hurricanes are extremely dangerous and can undoubtedly completely  flip many people’s lives in a blink of an eye, especially  if they live in areas that are close to the coast/shore. ]

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In conclusion, ........ (Wrap it up).

[ In conclusion, hurricanes, also known as cyclones, and typhoons can have devastating effects on people and their communities through strong winds and storm surges. The emotional toll of such disasters can be overwhelming, as families are left to pick up the pieces of their lives after the storm passes. ]

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Nail it - End with a memorable ending. Make it a 'MEAL': Metaphor or Simile/ Effect or End Result / Advice/ Lesson.

[ As the old saying goes, "It's better to look ahead and prepare, than to look back and regret. Just as the author mentions, by taking proactive measures, communities can better protect themselves against the unpredictable forces of nature. ]