Revising and Editing Set1

Front

What change should be made in sentence 3? Options: Change rise to raise, Change cities to cities', Insert a comma after supplies, Change would not have occurred to will not have occurred.

Back

Change cities to cities'

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What change should be made in sentence 5? Options: Change Bessemer's to Bessemers, Change invention to invension, Change rely to relied, Change iron to Iron

Back

Change rely to relied

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What change should be made in sentence 7? Options:

Change permanently to perminently

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Change changed to changes

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Change large to largest

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Change pittsburgh to Pittsburgh

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Change pittsburgh to Pittsburgh

Front

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3? Options: Change violin to Violin, Change disagree to disagreeing, No change is needed.

Back

Insert a comma after boring

Front

What change should be made in sentence 5? Options:

Change Friendships to Freindships

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Change as to until

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Change rehearse to will rehearse

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Change you're to your

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Change you're to your

Front

What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?
Options:
1. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it. When you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
2. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
3. All of the effort, you invest in developing your skills. Is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
4. All of the effort you invest, in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

Back

All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

Front

Which sentence should replace sentence 3 to serve as a more effective controlling idea for Gabby's paper?

Back

Yet, the story of how modern-day forks, spoons, and knives developed is an interesting journey through time.

Front

Which word should replace stuff in the sentence? Options: materials, parts, units, pieces.

Back

materials

Front

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 13 and 14? Options:

Forks during the Middle Ages were smaller, they became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using forks.

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Forks during the Middle Ages, which were smaller and more widely used for eating, though everyone did not like the idea of using them.

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During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and more widely used for eating, and everyone did not like the idea of using forks, though.

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During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using them.

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During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using them.

Front

Transition to add at the beginning of sentence 20 to improve connection to the previous sentence:

For this reason

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In other words

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In any case

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At the same time

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For this reason