Revising and Editing Set1

What change should be made in sentence 3? Options: Change rise to raise, Change cities to cities', Insert a comma after supplies, Change would not have occurred to will not have occurred.

What change should be made in sentence 5? Options: Change Bessemer's to Bessemers, Change invention to invension, Change rely to relied, Change iron to Iron

What change should be made in sentence 7? Options:

Change permanently to perminently

Change changed to changes

Change large to largest

Change pittsburgh to Pittsburgh

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3? Options: Change violin to Violin, Change disagree to disagreeing, No change is needed.

What change should be made in sentence 5? Options:

Change Friendships to Freindships

Change as to until

Change rehearse to will rehearse

Change you're to your

What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?
Options:
1. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it. When you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
2. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
3. All of the effort, you invest in developing your skills. Is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.
4. All of the effort you invest, in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

Which sentence should replace sentence 3 to serve as a more effective controlling idea for Gabby's paper?

Which word should replace stuff in the sentence? Options: materials, parts, units, pieces.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 13 and 14? Options:

Forks during the Middle Ages were smaller, they became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using forks.

Forks during the Middle Ages, which were smaller and more widely used for eating, though everyone did not like the idea of using them.

During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and more widely used for eating, and everyone did not like the idea of using forks, though.

During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using them.

Transition to add at the beginning of sentence 20 to improve connection to the previous sentence:

For this reason

In other words

In any case

At the same time