MISSION #1: Revising and Editing Station

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What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 19? Options:

I picked up a stick and placed it in the water.

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I picked up and placed it in the water, a stick.

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I picked up a stick in the water but placed it.

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I picked up in the water a stick, and I placed it.

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I picked up a stick and placed it in the water.

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3.11C

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What is the correct way to write sentence 3? Options:

Some are on vacation, and some are at day camp.

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Some are on vacation. With some at day camp.

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Some being on vacation and some being at day camp.

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Some are on vacation, and some are. At day camp.

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Some are on vacation, and some are at day camp.

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3.11D.i

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What change needs to be made in sentence 4? Options: Change families to familys, Change are celebrating to is celebrating, Change fourth to Fourth, Delete the period

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Change fourth to Fourth

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3.11D.ix

Front

Which sentence can BEST replace sentence 5 to improve the introduction to this paper? Options:

I don't usually pay much attention to Stella's excitement, but sometimes my brother does.

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Last week Mom bought Stella a new book, and she was so excited to read it by herself.

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Stella gets excited every afternoon, and it is fun to watch her jump around the house.

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She already had her rain boots on and was waiting excitedly for Mom to take us outside.

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She already had her rain boots on and was waiting excitedly for Mom to take us outside.

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3.11B.i

Front

What is the correct spelling of the word? Options:

Recieve

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Receive

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Recievee

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Receve

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Receive

Front

What change needs to be made in sentence 2? Options:

Change On to In

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Change my to our

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Change is usually doing to are usually doing

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Change other to other

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Change is usually doing to are usually doing

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3.11D.i

Front

What change is needed in sentence 8? Options: Change milo to Milo, Change offered to offering, Change park to parks, Change didn’t to didnt

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Change milo to Milo

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3.11D.ix

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What is the BEST way to combine sentences 30 and 31? Options:

The water slowed down after a while, so I asked Mom what had happened.

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The water slowed down, but I asked Mom what had happened to the water.

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The water slowed down and what had happened I asked Mom after a while.

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The water slowed down, and I asked what had happened to Mom after a while.

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The water slowed down after a while, so I asked Mom what had happened.

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3.11C