Editing Sentences

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Fix the sentence: In the end the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb not eating her.

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In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb and didn't eat her.

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Fix the sentence: then in the middle of the story he was feeling a little bit about eating the lamb.

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In the middle of the story, he was feeling a little bad about eating the lamb.

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Fix the sentence: but the at the end he did not want to eat the lamb,and was sad that he forced the lamb out and then thought the lamb might freezes to death

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In the end, he did not want to eat the lamb. The Wolf was sad that he forced the lamb out, because he thought the lamb might freeze to death.

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Fix the sentence: The wolf and lamb are both very changeable.

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The wolf and the lamb change throughout the story.

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What should you do before you turn in your work?

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Edit and make corrections.

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Fix the sentence: He was going to eat her then he got upset threw her out then he was worried then he was nice.

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He was going to eat her, but he got upset and threw her out. Then he was worried about the lamb and chose to be nice.

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What is the best way to make sure you spell characters names correctly? Options: Ask someone near you, Use a dictionary, Look in the text, Sound it out.

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Look in the text.

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Read the ________________ you wrote and make sure they are a complete thought.

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