Revision of Sentences

Front

Repetition: The red car, which was a fiery red color, sped down the red road.

Back

Repetition

Front

Irrelevance: The cat, which was a calico, sat on the mat and purred loudly.

Back

Irrelevance

Front

Confusion: The ambiguous sentence led to much confusion and debate.

Back

Confusion

Front

Extraneous Information: The tall, lanky man with the blue eyes and the funny hat walked down the street.

Back

Extraneous Information

Front

Repetition: The big, bad wolf huffed and puffed and huffed and puffed.

Back

Repetition

Front

Irrelevance: The sky was blue and the birds were singing as the old woman crossed the street.

Back

Irrelevance

Front

Confusion: The sentence was so convoluted that it was difficult to understand.

Back

Confusion

Front

Extraneous Information: The car, a sleek black sedan with leather seats and a sunroof, was parked in the garage.

Back

Extraneous Information

Front

Repetition: The dog barked and barked and barked at the mail carrier.

Back

Repetition

Front

Irrelevance: The wind blew through the trees as the child played in the sandbox.

Back

Irrelevance