Rockin' Review-Editing and Revising

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What is the best way to combine sentences 11 and 12? Options: Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, so it still has the same goal., Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, it still has the same goal., Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, but it still has the same goal., Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, or it still has the same goal.

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Today the Acton Children’s Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, but it still has the same goal.

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Which transition BEST replaces "most importantly" at the beginning of sentence 15?

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Finally

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What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 22? At this booth, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime, she had made it by herself with no help from her parents. Options: At this booth, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime that she had made by herself. With no help from her parents, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime that she had made by herself at this booth. With no help from her parents, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime at the booth that she made by herself. Correct Answer: At this booth, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime that she had made by herself.

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At this booth, fourth grader Hannah Nguyen sold slime that she had made by herself.

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Julie needs a more clearly stated central idea. Which sentence BEST replaces sentence 4 to improve the central idea of her paper?

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It is a place where young people who run their own businesses can make money by selling their products or services.

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Julie wants to use a more specific word than made in sentence 24. Which word BEST replaces this word? Options: got, had, earned, created

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earned

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What change should be made to sentence 2? Options: Change thought to thinks , Change him to himself, Change is to are, Delete the period after enough

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Change him to himself.

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What change should be made in sentence 4? Options: Change finded to found, Change would be to had been, Change his to their, Change favorite to more favorite

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Change finded to found

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What change should be made in sentence 6? Options: Change suddenly to sudden, Change had to have, Change bright to brightly, Change ideas to idea

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Change ideas to idea

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What change should be made in sentence 3? Options: Change card to cards, Change he to his, Change the period to a question mark, Change looked to saw

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Change card to cards

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What change should be made to sentence 5? Options: Change speshal to special, Change someone to some one, Insert a comma after nothing, Delete the word enough

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Change speshal to special