Revise and Edit

Front

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere.
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

Back

change dessert to desert

Front

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

change helpfull to helpful

Front

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play!
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

Change me and my brother to my brother and I

Front

20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

Back

Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

Front

We've got to go quickly, said his mother.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

insert quotation marks after quickly

Front

The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory. I want to add more detail after this sentence. Which sentence could BEST follow this sentence?

Back

An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope.

Front

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence? Timothy turned his homework in late. He ran quickly. However, she was. The bird perched on the power line.

Back

However, she was.

Front

The lite from the morning sunrise was absolutely beautiful.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

change lite to light

Front

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

change the to The

Front

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project.

Back

Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.