Revise and edit practice

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What change, if any should be made in sentence 2?

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Change was to is

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What is the best way to combine sentence 3 and 4?

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We are able to learn things hands on by doing experiments.

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?
Options:
Change middle school to middleschool
Insert a comma after science
Change favirite to favorite
Make no change

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Change favirite to favorite

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12? Options: Change ourselves to himself, Change they to he, Change see to saw, Make no change

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Change they to he

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What is the BEST way to rewrite sentence 17? I am learning more I am getting better grades.

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I am learning more, so I am getting better grades.

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What is the BEST way to revise sentence 15? Options: You would place a laundry basket. At the bottom of this slide. , Place a laundry basket, you would, at the bottom of this slide. , At the bottom of this slide, you would place a laundry basket. , You would at the bottom of this slip place a laundry basket.

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At the bottom of this slide, you would place a laundry basket.

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Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 9?
First, you would sort the clothes into three types, and the machine fold one type at a time. (8) Then you would set the machine on whichever type you wanted to fold first.
(9) You would start by dropping the clothes. (10) There would be an opening at the top for this.
Options: After you set the machine, , When you finish folding clothes, , For example, , Before all of this happens,

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When you finish folding clothes,

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?
You would start by dropping the clothes.
There would be an opening at the top for this.

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Add into the machine after clothes

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 13? (13) Meanwhile, engineers for Otis Elevator Company were developing its own stairway designs.

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Change its to their

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What is the BEST way to combine sentences 17 and 18?

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Dinosaur experts believe that, when the dinosaur bit into its prey, the venom ran down the teeth and poisoned the victim.