Revising Wordy Sentences

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What is the purpose of revising wordy sentences?

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To make sentences clearer and more concise by removing unnecessary words.

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What does it mean to revise a sentence?

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To change the structure or wording of a sentence to improve clarity and readability.

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What is a wordy sentence?

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A sentence that uses more words than necessary, making it longer and less clear.

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What is an example of a wordy phrase?

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"Due to the fact that" can be revised to "because."

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What is a concise sentence?

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A sentence that expresses an idea clearly and directly, using the fewest words necessary.

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How can you identify a wordy sentence?

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Look for phrases that can be simplified or shortened without losing meaning.

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What is the benefit of using active voice in sentences?

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Active voice makes sentences stronger and more direct, improving clarity.

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What is an example of revising a sentence to active voice?

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"The book was read by the student" can be revised to "The student read the book."

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What is a transitional phrase?

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A word or phrase that connects ideas in writing, helping to guide the reader.

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What is an example of a transitional phrase?

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"In addition to" can be used to add information.