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What change should be made in the following sentence? This rise in cities steel supplies would not have occurred without the work of Henry Bessemer.

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change cities to cities'

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What change should be made in the following sentence? Before Bessemer's invention, steel was costly to make, so most businesses rely upon iron.

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change rely to relied

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What change should be made in the following sentence? This way of making steel permanently changed the appearance of large cities such as pittsburgh.

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change pittsburgh to Pittsburgh

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What change should be made in the following sentence? A sudden supply of steel led to the construction of many skyscrapers bridges, and railroad tracks.

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Insert a comma after skyscrapers.

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What change should be made in the following sentence? Bessemer discovered a knew way to make this strong, but lightweight, building material.

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change knew to new

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What change should be made in the following sentence? Tall buildings and sturdy bridges could be constructed, railroad tracks could connect distant places.

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Tall buildings and sturdy bridges could be constructed, and railroad tracks could connect distant places.

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What change should be made in the following sentence? They think that playing the violin is boring but I disagree.

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insert a comma after boring

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What change should be made in the following sentence? Friendships form as you rehearse together and push each other to do you're best.

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change you're to your

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What change should be made in the following sentences? All of the effort you invest. In developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

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All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

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What change should be made in the following sentence? You will meet kids with the same interests and goals as you though you join an orchestra

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change though to if