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What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2? As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!

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As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

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The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere.
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

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change dessert to desert

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The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

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change helpfull to helpful

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Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play!
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

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Change me and my brother to my brother and I

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20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

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Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year.

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What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2? As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!

Back

As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

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The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

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change dessert to desert

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The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Back

change helpfull to helpful

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What is the correct way to write the sentence: 20 million people almost visit Disney World each year?

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Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year.

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Mom surprised us all when she declared, "let's all go get pizza!"

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Change let's to Let's