A Helping Hand revise and edit

A Helping Hand revise and edit

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Q1 What is the best concluding sentence for this paragraph?

• A A career with the American Red Cross provides opportunities to help others.

• B The American Red Cross is an important organization that helps others.

• C I plan to work for the American Red Cross one day.

• D The American Red Cross needs volunteers to join them today.

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Q2 The meaning of sentence 6 can be improved by adding which of the following to the end of the sentence?

• F they need a lot of money

• G because they do not have enough workers

• H to support their activities

• J to take care of their workers

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Q3 What is the best way, if any, to improve sentence 7?

• A Other Red Cross workers work full-time.

• B Other people want more pay to work for the Amer. Red Cross.

• C The Red Cross also has paid workers.

• D No revision is needed.

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Q4 Which sentence is not needed in this paragraph?

• F sentence 1

• G sentence 5

• H sentence 10

• J sentence 11