STAAR Revising: The Benefits of Martial Arts

STAAR Revising: The Benefits of Martial Arts

Grade 7

Multiple Choice

What is the MOST effective way for Rose to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• A. Playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, so not every kid wants to join a team.

• B. Playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, but not every kid wants to join a team.

• C. Not every kid wants to join a team, also playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise.

• D. Because playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, not every kid wants to join a team.

Multiple Choice

Sentence 8 lacks clarity. What is the MOST effective change Rose can make to improve the clarity of this sentence?

• F. I began taking karate at age seven when my parents insisted I get off the couch and “do something.”

• G. I began taking karate, when my parents at age seven insisted I get off the couch and “do something.”

• H. My parents insisted I get off the couch and “do something” when I began taking karate at age seven.

• J. When I began taking karate, my parents insisted I get off the couch and “do something” at age seven.

Multiple Choice

Which of the following sentences should replace sentence 13 to serve as a more effective topic sentence of this paragraph?

• A. As if the physical benefits weren’t enough, participating in martial arts also helps kids develop strong mental focus.

• B. In martial arts class, the instruction goes beyond learning how to perform physical moves more effectively.

• C. Many people are surprised by the variety of benefits that they receive from taking a martial arts class.

• D. Taking a martial arts class will certainly help someone get in better shape physically, but that’s not the only benefit.

Multiple Choice

Which word would be a more precise word to use than really in sentence 21?

• F. actually

• G. quickly

• H. honestly

• J. constantly

Multiple Choice

Which sentence in the fifth paragraph (sentences 24–28) is extraneous and should be deleted?

• A. Sentence 25

• B. Sentence 26

• C. Sentence 27

• D. Sentence 28

Multiple Choice

Which sentence should Rose add after sentence 31 to improve the conclusion of her letter?

• F. Why do you think these classes are so popular?

• G. Are there any other benefits you want to know about?

• H. Do you see why it’s better for you than using a computer?

• J. Why not put down your phone, try a class, and see for yourself?