T3W7 WA3 Review

T3W7 WA3 Review

Open Ended

Read the comments on your WA3. What is one key point of improvement you need to make for your end-of-year examination?

Common error 1: Not enough details on why you chose the two workshops

Which is better?

• We should attend this camp because we both love writing.

• We have always been inspired by Roald Dahl's horror stories, and this workshop will teach us how to write stories as chilling as his.

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In pairs, embellish this point with your own details.

Task 3: We will enjoy the Horror Haunts workshop as we both love horror stories!

Hints: Consider inventing a memory with details, explaining what kind of horror stories you enjoy, or explaining why you want to attend a horror story workshop, etc.

Common error 2. What's wrong with this sentence?

"We can keep our friends and family on our toes by writing suspenseful stories filled with spine-chilling ghouls and beasts."

Common error 2: Lifting

"We can keep our friends and family on our toes by writing suspenseful stories filled with spine-chilling ghouls and beasts."

Lifted entirely from the poster.

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In pairs, PARAPHRASE the following sentence to avoid lifting.

"We can keep our friends and family on our toes by writing suspenseful stories filled with spine-chilling ghouls and beasts."

Tip: Find key words and replace them with a word with a similar meaning, without changing the meaning of the sentence.

What is wrong with this?

Task 3: Include a workshop in the camp that you would recommend attending together.

• I would attend the Journalism 101 workshop as I have always wanted to be a journalist since I was young. The camp could give me tips to master the art of journalism.

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Corrections: Find 2 sentences with the most amount of grammatical errors.

Rewrite it here. Ensure the sentence is error free.