Mentor Sentence Lesson Day 3 (November 10)

Mentor Sentence Lesson Day 3 (November 10)

by Janie Rushing

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​REVISE

​Let's revise. Let's make it SOUND better.

Open Ended

The mothers lay out

All kinds of ______ treats:

Ice cream and snow cones

And dainty, iced sweets.

Think of a synonym for cold. CHOOSE A MORE VIVID ADJECTIVE THAN COLD.

​Do you hear the change? What word did I use instead of cold?

Multiple Choice

What word did I replace "cold" with when I revised my poem? Go back and listen again.

• Frozen

• Really cold