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My dad bought me a dog on my birthday. It is a male golden retriever dog. I really love him as my pet. His name is Choco. He has brown fur.

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His fur is really soft and he likes to be rubbed on his belly. He has a long tail and big body. I always take him for walk around because he really like it. Choco is already as the part of our family.

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​My dad bought me a dog on my birthday. It is a male golden retriever dog. His name is Choco. He's about a year old. He is really cute.

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Choco has dark eyes and his nose is a little bit large. He has brown dark-pigmented fur and a big body. His fur is really soft and I like to rub it on his belly. He has a long tail and his legs are strong. Choco is about 30cm in height and 5kg in weight.

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Every Sunday I bring choco to walk around at my house complex. He really enjoys it. He runs happily while barking cutely. I really love him as my pet. He is already a part of my family.​

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