Correction Form 4 Term 2 Aug 22 Writing

​Form 4 Term 2 Exam

Writing (Aug 2022)​

​Part 1 (20 marks) Question 1

You received an email from your cousin, Johan, who has just finished his exams.

Hi,

This has been a stressful week for me. So, I want to relax during the weekend. Where shall we go and what can we do there? How shall we go?

Write soon.

Bye!​

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Hi,

This has been a stressful week for me. So, I want to relax during the weekend. Where shall we go and what can we do there? How shall we go?

Write soon.

Bye!​

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​I want to relax during weekend.

Q1: Who is 'I'?

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Q2: What is the definition of weekend?​

​C1 : Where shall we go (to relax)?

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C2 : What can we do there (to relax)?

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C3 : How shall we go (there)?​

​I want to relax during weekend. (Saturday & Sunday only)

Pronouns used : ​'I' and 'We'.

In your essay, you should:

1. Suggest (Johan is asking for your opinion. So, you cannot command and inform him where to go) a few places to go so that he can relax.​

2. You can suggest places (more than 1) and you can suggest different activities for different days (1 for Saturday, another 1 for Sunday)

3. ​Do not forget to mention how should you guys go to your destination.

Key Points:

​* Well done for his effort in doing revision for his examination.

* Tell him u had similar experience too.

* Suggest a few things we can do together to release stress during this upcoming weekend (Saturday and Sunday​)

​Introduction: (Paragraph 1)

Key Points:

​C1: Where?

​* Shopping Centre

* Be specific, which Mall? (Bintang Megamall? Permaisuri City? Permy Mall? Boulevard Shopping Complex?) + ​reasons (1 or 2)

C2: What to do there (to release stress)?

​* Watch a movie (Which Movie ? + how can watching the movie help Johan to release stress?)

* Favourite fast food? (Which one + Why?)

* Hang around (Which stores? + how can visiting these stores help him to release stress?)​​

Paragraph 2 : (Suggestion) Saturday

Key Points:

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C3: How to go there? ​

* Johan can come over my house , then we call a Grab / MAXIM.

*What time? how about 10.00 am? (Always remember you are suggesting)​

Paragraph 2 : (Suggestion) Saturday

Key Points:

​C1: Where?

​* Visit grandpa's orchard at Sibuti / Batu Niah​

C2: What to do there (to release stress)?

​* eat all your favourite local fruits at grandpa's orchard (name a few local fruits like... mango, rambutan, mangosteen, Langsat, Pomelo) for free

* How can this help to release stress? Eat all you can, (they are free, they are fresh and we get to talk to grandpa too). ​

C3: How to go there? ​

* suggest Johan to come over to my house, we will go together with my parents as they wanted to visit grandpa too.

Paragraph 3 : (Suggestion) Sunday

Key Points:

​* Ask Johan what is his opinion about your suggestions.

* Tell him you can't wait to have fun with him this upcoming Saturday. ​

* Tell him you are waiting for his reply so that you can make arrangement such as informing your parents to visit grandpa's house , booking movie tickets etc. ​

Paragraph 4: Closing

​Part 2 (20 marks) Question 2

Your class has been discussing which is better, using cash or credit card. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay on your opinion on the matter. ​

In your essay, you should write about:

• your preference

• reasons to support your preference

• effects of using cash or card

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Write your essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.​

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In your essay, you should write about:

• your preference

  • Means which one do you prefer to use? Cash or credit card?​

• reasons to support your preference

  • give a few reasons (Plural - reasonS) why u prefer to use cash / card and at the same time compare both of them under the same reasons you give. ​

• effects of using cash or card

  • what is the effects of using cash or card? give​ a few.

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• Almost every adult has a credit card nowadays as it really helps them during difficult times or during emergency.

• Give a simple definition of credit card.

• Make your stand (e​.g. In my opinion, I prefer to use _____ over ______).

​Introduction:

• With cash, we can manage our finance / money easier compared to credit card.

• With cash,

​Paragraph 2 : Reason No. 1 - better financial management