I13 WRITING TASK 1 INTRO AND OVERVIEW P1

​ielts writing task 1

overview and introduction p1​

​Music attendance rate in Australia, overweight men and women in Australia

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​The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

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Paraphrasing key words:

The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

​PARAPHRASING

-percentage: proportion, figure, statistic, data

-people: participants, attendees

-different age group: five age categories, at different ages​

Subject | Subject

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Write the introduction:

The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

​OVERVIEW STRATERGY

​The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

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Write the overview

The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

​OVERVIEW STRATERGY

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Overall, all age groups gained an increase in their music concert’s attendance rate over the period shown, except for the 55-64 category. Moreover, the 16-24 age group saw most significant growth in the percentage of people participating in music concerts.​

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​The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

​The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

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Write the introduction:

The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

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Paraphrasing key words:

The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

​PARAPHRASING

​-Percentage: proportion -Men and women: males and females, two genders

-overweight: weigh more than average, obesity, obese people

-1980 to 2010: in a 30 year period

Subject | Subject

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Write the introduction

The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

​OVERVIEW STRATERGY

​The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

Open Ended

Write the overview

The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.

​OVERVIEW STRATERGY

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As can be seen from the bar chart, the ten year period witnessed steady increase in the percentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia. Moreover, the rate of men who weighed more than average exceeded that of women in each year of the surveyed time.

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​The chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in Australia from 1980 to 2010.