W24L2 Essay Parts: Organization

Do Now: When you enter class, please...

1. ​​Silently enter and immediately take your seat.

2. Keep all personal electronics away.

3. Take out your chromebook and plug your charger to its nearest power strip.

4. Join our Quizizz game using the game code.

5. In a NEW tab, complete the Learn and Match activities for this assignment: .

6. ​If you finish, remain silent and raise your hand to be helped by the teacher(s).

7. Stay on task until further notice

objective

SWBAT

• recognize, examine, and compose thesis statement

• review mechanics analysis

• introduce conclusion paragraphs

• collaborate with peers to build on strong essay

• understand and create a graphic organizer following a prompt

criteria for success

your assignments will:

• be complete and accurate

• be your best effort

• your own work

• use correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation

• demonstrate active participation

Multiple Choice

REVIEW: Identify the error.

At the dance Ember sat on the bleechers Bryson leaned against the wall beside the punch bowl Caleb sat in a chair sleeping.

• Fragment

• Comma Splice

• Complete Sentence

• Run-on Sentnce

Multiple Choice

Claim: Parents should limit the sugar-sweetened beverages their children drink.

Evidence: Sugar-sweetened beverages can contribute to health problems such as heart disease and diabetes.

Choose the analysis that connects the evidence to the claim.

• Parents are obligated to take steps to protect the health of their children

• Sugar-sweetened beverages are often marketed to children through television and advertisements.

Multiple Choice

Claim: Bryson Starr's Cool Morning is an important book.

Evidence: Cool Morning helped inspire the environmental movement in America.

Choose the analysis that connects the evidence to the claim.

• An important book is one that has the power to transform society.

• Cool Morning should be taught in all American high schools.

• Important books should be on more displays in book stores so more people purchase them.

• Bryson is the best!

Multiple Choice

Claim: Max is a good dog.

Evidence: Max consistently follows her master's commands.

Choose the analysis that connects the evidence to the claim.

• All good dogs go to heaven.

• Max is playful and affectionate.

• Good dogs are obedient.

Open Ended

Write an analysis sentence that best connects the evidence to the claim.

Claim: Aubrey should not be elected class president.

Evidence: The other candidate, Blair, is much more collaborative.

​which analysis?

Write an analysis sentence that best connects the evidence to the claim.

• Claim: Aubrey should not be elected class president.

  Evidence: The other candidate, Blair, is much more collaborative.

• Analysis: Good leaders must be collaborative because groups work better with teamwork directed by a strong leader. As class president, Aubrey will not effectively lead a group because she won't collaborate but Blair will.

​thesis: Schools should be held january through december because it offers more practice, more socializing, and more parent time.

• ​jacob wrote:

  In closing, schools should run year-round because students need more work time. It helps kids when they get extra time and do not feel rushed. Longer school years also give parents more time to run errands they can't normally do due to childcare responsibilities. All in all, the benefits outweigh cons.

• ​hunter wrote:

  In closing, schools should run year-round because students can spend more time working on educational skills to better prepare for the future. Also, by being in school all year, kids can socialize as much as they study. Finally, parent benefit too. Parents can do run errands, work on home improvement, and taxes because their kids are away.

​Conclusion

• ​review: understanding conclusion paragraphs

  • First: grab headphones

  • Next: Go to edpuzzle.com

  • Then, complete Conclusion Paragraph

  • Finally, complete yesterday's IXL.

​organization

• ​writing sol strategies

  • Folding technique using scratch paper day of SOL.

• Actively listen to the model on how to properly use a four square graphic organizer to plan and write your essay.

​organization

• ​writing sol strategies

  • Folding technique using scratch paper day of SOL.