PRONOUNS- ILT 2 ACTIVITY

Open Ended

READ THE TWO PARAGRAPHS BELOW. EXPLAIN THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE PARAGRAPHS. WHICH ONE IS BETTER? Explain your answer.

Paragraph 1:
Tia Mila resembled the woman in the photographs that Biboy knew as Biboy's mother. Biboy had not met nor seen Biboy's Tia Mila before. Tia Mila had a hard face, just like all the strangers walking in the streets. But Biboy knew Tia Mila was the one person in the world who could, if Tia Mila would, take care of Biboy.

Paragraph 2:
Tia Mila resembled the woman in the photographs that Biboy knew as his mother. He had not met nor seen his Tia Mila before. She had a hard face, just like all the strangers walking in the streets. But he knew she was the one person in the world who could, if she would, take care of him.