Revising- Clarity & Extraneous Information

Revising- Clarity & Extraneous Information

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Multiple Choice

When fighting for justice, everyone usually decides to protest in the street.

What word would best replace everyone.

• The youth

• The elderly

• Those who are scared

Multiple Select

Check ALL that apply. Justice is a thing that many people have died fighting for.

Which word best replace thing...

• idea

• cause

• issue

• object

Multiple Choice

(1) Many people think that global warming isn't a problem, but it is an issue that effects everyone on Earth. (2) Soon we won't have enough clean water or air to survive. (3) Some scientist say that we will run out of water before the end of our lifetime. (4) The purest water comes from the island of Fiji. (5) If we don't work diligently to save our resources, we may die out just as the dinosaurs did.

Which sentence is extraneous ?

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 3

• Sentence 4

• Sentence 5

Multiple Choice

(1) Saving coral reefs is the biggest overlooked issue in our society. (2) Coral reefs provide food to the smaller fish, who then provide food to the larger fish, that humans then hunt to eat. (3) As coral reefs die, so do our food supply. (4) Coral reefs are important to feed fish and ultimately humans. (5) Eventually, there will be no more fish to eat if we don't do more to protect the reefs.

Which sentence is redundant and can be removed?

• Sentence 2

• Sentence 3

• Sentence 4

• Sentence 5