DA 2 Revising and Editing review

DA 2 Review

​Revising & Editing Typing Question:

"In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way."

DA 2 Review

​Revising & Editing Typing Question:

"In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way."

WE DO NOT USE A.C.E!!!! You are just revising and editing the sentence. So you have to "fix" the sentence by typing it the correct way.
YOU DO NOT HAVE TO PUT TEXT EVIDENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO NOT PUT TEXT EVIDENCE!!!!!!!

• Mary does too.

• It is blue too.

• Whales do too.

​Incomplete

• Sarah and Isabel love baking cookies.

• The flag is red and white.

• Sharks and dolphins live in the ocean.

​Complete Sentences

Revising & Editing

Multiple Choice

Is this a complete sentence?

Ulysses went to the park and the library.

• Yes it is complete

• No it is incomplete

Multiple Choice

Which sentence is incomplete and needs to be revised?

• Marlon and Carson went to the beach.

• Carson went to the beach.

• Marlon went too.

Revising & Editing

​Combining sentences

When combining sentences we need to play close attention to what the two sentences mean. Sometimes we can add a comma and a coordinating conjunction. (F.A.N.B.O.Y.S). Other times we can combine ideas into lists using just commas.

Multiple Choice

What is the best way to combine these sentences in a clear and effective way?

(1) Ayden went to Walmart. (2) He also went to McDonalds.

• Ayden went to Walmart, but also McDonalds.

• Ayden went to Walmart, or McDonalds.

• Ayden went to Walmart and he also went to McDonalds.

• Ayden went to Walmart, and McDonalds.

Multiple Choice

Which F.A.N.B.O.Y could we use to combine these sentences in a clear and effective way?

(4) Sophie did not want to wake up. (5) She also did not want to go to school.

• nor

• but

• so

• and

Multiple Choice

Giselle want to combine these two sentences from her essay. Which of these sentences show how Giselle could combine these ideas in a clear and effective way.

(7) I like to go shopping and skating during the summer. (8) I also like to go swimming.

• I like to go shopping and skating and swimming during the summer.

• I like to go shopping, skating, or swimming.

• I like to go shopping, skating, and swimming during the summer.

Making a list using commas.

​Combine similar ideas using commas to form a list:

Ex: Sharks and dolphins live in the ocean. Whales do too.

All of these animals live in the ocean. To combine these sentences in a clear and effective way, we need to list them using commas.

Sharks, dolphins, and whales live in the ocean.

Multiple Choice

Which of the sentences combines these ideas in a clear and effective way?

(10) Katherine and Paisley love reading. (11) Maria does too.

• Katherine and Paisley and Maria love reading.

• Katherine, Paisley, or Maria love reading.

• Katherine, Paisley, and Maria love reading.

• Katherine and Paisley love reading and Maria does too.

Open Ended

Ezra wants to combine the ideas in sentences 6 and 7. In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way.

(6) Riding bikes and walking are ways to reduce air pollution. (7) Taking the bus does too.

Open Ended

Randy wants to combine the ideas in sentences 15 and 16. In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way.

(15) Soccer and football are the best sports. (16) Baseball is too.

Open Ended

Ms. Perez wants to combine the ideas in sentences 2 and 3. In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way.

(2) Sage and blush are beautiful colors. (3) Mint is too.