AP ENG- Body Paragraphs

Body Paragraphs

Essay Writing

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TITLE: ESSAY TERMINOLOGY

The Basic Terminology 

• Thesis Statement:  Your position and the essay’s controlling idea.  Needs to include a “because.”  For example, “Writing a persuasive essay is not very difficult, because the outline of the writing process is understandable.

• Topic Sentence:  The controlling idea of a paragraph that supports the thesis statement.

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• Transition Word:  Starts the concrete detail sentence.  Include one of the following:  For example, For instance, In addition, Additionally.

• Transition Lead In: A phrase used to start your concrete detail using a transition word. “For example, in her ground breaking book, Dr. Pen states...”

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• Concrete Detail:  A quote from the story that supports the thesis and the topic sentence

• Commentary: Your explanation of how the concrete detail supports the topic sentence.

• Closing Sentence: Closes the paragraph and transitions to the next paragraph. Includes one of the transition phrases: Given these points, as has been noted, for the most part, on the whole.

• Ratio: 1 concrete detail to 2 commentary for expository and persuasive essays.

USE YOUR NOTES TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS

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Your position and the essay’s controlling idea. Needs to include a “because.” For example, “Writing a persuasive essay is not very difficult, because the outline of the writing process is understandable.

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The controlling idea of a paragraph that supports the thesis statement.

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Starts the concrete detail sentence. Include one of the following: For example, For instance, In addition, Additionally.

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A phrase used to start your concrete detail using a transition word. “For example, in her ground breaking book, Dr. Pen states...”

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A quote from the story that supports the thesis and the topic sentence

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Your explanation of how the concrete detail supports the topic sentence.

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Closes the paragraph and transitions to the next paragraph. Includes one of the transition phrases: Given these points, as has been noted, for the most part, on the whole.

​TEA

​In order to create a body paragraph, we follow the TEA method. This stands for the following:

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• ​Topic: Introduces your reason.

• ​Evidence: Uses an example to prove your reason.

• ​Analysis: Explain how your example shows you

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We use the

Method for developing body paragraphs.

​T - Topic Sentences

• The 1st topic sentences are where we explain our first reason and how it relates to our topic.

• ​It is 1-2 sentences long.

• ​It should AQA (Answer the Question Asked).

• ​The topic is our glass. It is necessary for TEA, but it is still empty. We need more after the thesis!

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The topic is our

. It is necessary for TEA, but it is empty.

Multiple Choice

How long is the Topic Section of the body paragraph?

• 1-2 sentences

• 2-3 sentences

• 3-4 sentences

• 4-5 sentences

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The 1st Topic Sentences introduce your

reason.

​T - Topic Sentences

• Example:

• ​Essay Thesis: In order to overcome challenges, one needs teamwork and resilience.

• ​1st Body Paragraph Topic Sentence:

• To begin, teamwork is necessary in order to overcome challenges. Without teamwork, life's difficulties are harder to face.

​T - Topic Sentences

How to build the body paragraph topic:

• Transition

• Topic + 1st Reason

• Explanation​​

• ​1st Body Paragraph Topic Sentence: To begin, teamwork is necessary in order to overcome challenges. Without teamwork, life's difficulties are harder to face.

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Type the Body Paragraph Topic sentences using the second reason of this Thesis Statement.

"In order to overcome challenges, one needs teamwork and resilience."

(1st Sentence: Transition + Topic and reason. 2nd Sentence: Explain the reason)

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Type the Body Paragraph Topic sentences using the first reason of this Thesis Statement.

"In order to be a hero, one needs bravery and knowledge."

(1st Sentence: Transition + Topic and reason. 2nd Sentence: Explain the reason)

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Type the Body Paragraph Topic sentences using the second reason of this Thesis Statement.

"In order to be a hero, one needs bravery and knowledge."

(1st Sentence: Transition + Topic and reason. 2nd Sentence: Explain the reason)

Poll

How well do you feel you understand how to compose topic sentences for body paragraphs?

• 1 - I don't really get what they're supposed to do

• 2 - I kind of understand it, but not fully.

• 3 - I understand it, but I'm not sure I know how to explain it to someone else.

• 4 - I understand it very well; I could explain it to others.

​LET'S REVIEW WHAT WE HAVE LEARNED SO FAR

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A typical essay has

paragraphs.

​Introduction

Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Body Paragraph 3

Conclusion​

Reorder

What is the correct order of an essay?

• Introduction

• Body Paragraph 1

• Body Paragraph 2

• Body Paragraph 3

• Conclusion

1

2

3

4

5

• 1
• 2
• 3
• 4
• 5

1. Hook (attention getter)

2. ​Background (bridge)

3. Thesis​

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​Opening Paragraph

​Parts of an Introduction Paragraph

Multiple Choice

True or False: Introduction paragraphs have three parts.

• True

• False

1. ​Restate the thesis (use different words)

2. Summarize claims from essay

3. ​Wrap Up (relate topic to larger ideas)

​Conclusion Paragraph

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Reorder

Put the parts of a conclusion paragraph into the correct order.

• Restate thesis claim

• Summarize main points of essay

• Wrap Up

1

2

3

• 1
• 2
• 3

Match

Match the type of paragraph with its correct parts.

• Introduction Paragraph

• Body Paragraph

• Conclusion Paragraph

hook, background, thesis

topic sentence, evidence and explanation, conclusion sentence

restate thesis claim, summarize key points, wrap up

• hook, background, thesis

• topic sentence, evidence and explanation, conclusion sentence

• restate thesis claim, summarize key points, wrap up

Multiple Choice

Where is the thesis placed in an essay?

• at the end of the introduction paragraph

• the first line of the essay

• by itself after the first paragraph

• the start of the first body paragraph

Multiple Choice

True or False: The thesis statement is the most important sentence in an essay.

• True

• False

Multiple Choice

What role does word choice play in an essay?

• Setting the tone
• Citing sources
• Lengthening the essay
• Formatting

Multiple Choice

What should be avoided in language in an essay?

• Formal language
• Biased connotations
• Personal opinions
• Emotional language
• Slang

Multiple Choice

What is the effect of using phrases like "in my opinion" in an essay?

• Strengthens the argument
• Adds clarity
• Weakens the voice
• Increases word count

Multiple Choice

What is the purpose of vivid verbs and adjectives in an essay?

• To confuse the reader
• To lengthen the essay
• To strengthen the writer's voice
• To simplify the content

Multiple Choice

What is a key element in developing body paragraphs?

• Using complex vocabulary
• Including supporting details and examples
• Keeping paragraphs short
• Using only facts

Multiple Choice

What should each sentence in a unified body paragraph do?

• Support the main idea
• Introduce a new idea
• Contrast the main idea
• Repeat the introduction

Multiple Choice

How can coherence be achieved in body paragraphs?

• By using many examples
• By ordering sentences logically
• By repeating key points
• By focusing on a single aspect

Multiple Choice

What should be avoided in academic essay writing?

• Formal language
• Slang
• Detailed examples
• Varied sentence structure

Multiple Choice

What is the effect of using "assignment language" like "This essay will show"?

• Increases professionalism
• Makes the essay more persuasive
• Diminishes the essay's impact
• Enhances reader engagement