Quote Integration Review

Quote Integration Review



Make sure to take notes. This will be on your part 2 test!

lead in "quote" (Orwell 42).
lead in "quote" (Collins 125).
lead in "quote" (Thomas 30).

example

lead in "Quote" (citation).

The citation should include the authors last name and page number with the period AFTER the parenthesis.

How

First, Let's review citations

Multiple Select

Select all the quotes that have correct citation.

• Jane Smith points out, in her article about the sun, that “only 55% of all Americans know that the sun is a star” (Smith 56).

• Mrs. Thomas  asks, "Why should we live with such hurry and waste of life?" ( pg 29).

• Randomly Napoleon, ”uttered a high-pitched whimper. Immediately the dogs bounded forward, seized four pigs by the ear and dragged them” (Orwell pages 82-83

• The promise of a better life dawned when his father got “a substitute teaching job at a high school” (Johnson 31).

•  First, an unjust action occurs when Napoleon and the pigs are inside the house. “Napoleon decreed that there should be a full investigation into Snowballs activities (Orwell 78)”.

Rule 1: Complete Sentence

Introduce the quotation with a complete sentence and a colon afterwards

●This needs to address what the character is doing or discussing at that time.

Example:
Della explains to Jim why she cut her hair: “I had my hair cut off and sold it because I couldn't have lived through Christmas without giving you a present” (O.Henry).

OR

This ended up being a concern for the hens: “They were just getting their clutches ready for the spring sitting, and they protested that to take the eggs away now was murder”(Orwell 76).

Multiple Choice

Which of the following correctly uses the complete sentence with a colon rule?

• The author states: "as winter drew on, Mollie became more and more troublesome" (Orwell 45).

• The animals became frustrated with by others not working to their full potential: "as winter drew on, Mollie became more and more troublesome" (Orwell 45).

• Snowball discussed that: "... Mollie became more and more troublesome" (Orwell 45).

Rule 2: Says Lead-In

• Simply state who is speaking in the quote

• This only works if a character is talking/ directly saying something

• Use brackets to keep with 3rd person

Example:

Della explains to Jim that “[she] had [her] hair cut off and sold it because [she] couldn't have lived through Christmas without giving [him] a present” (O' Henry).

OR

As Clover asks Murial to read over the commandments, Murial says, “It says ‘no animal shall sleep in a bed with sheets’ she announced finally” (Orwell 67).

Multiple Choice

Which of the following uses the second rule (says lead in) correctly?

• In the text it states “one of the cows broke in the door of the store shed with her horn and all the animals began to help themselves from the bins” (Orwell 19).

• Boxer tells the other animals, "'I have no wish to take a life, not even a human life'" (Orwell 43).

• The animals create plans to make a windmill "the plans grew into a complicated mass of cranks and cog-wheels..." (Orwell 49).

Rule 3: Embedded Quotes

Embedded Quotes - This is the most difficult!

●Blend your writing with the quote to make a complete sentence

●An easy way to do this is to use one of our sentence starters we studied earlier in the year!

●A comma goes before the quote if it follows any comma rule

Example:

Waverly’s mother’s advice would also help “[her] older brothers and [her] rise above their circumstances” (Tan 1).

OR

They are all in the yard, then randomly Napoleon,”uttered a high-pitched whimper. Immediately the dogs bounded forward, seized four pigs by the ear and dragged them”(Orwell 82-83)

Multiple Choice

Which of the following has a quote embedded correctly?

• The animals are thrilled about the windmill as it "would light the stalls and warm them in the winter" (Orwell 48).

• In the text, "the men gave a shout of triumph" (Orwell 41).

• This ended up being a concern for the hens: “They were just getting their clutches ready for the spring sitting, and they protested that to take the eggs away now was murder”(Orwell 76).

Now Apply

Use the notes that you should have taken and answer the following questions.

Note: Not all quotes have been integrated correctly. You might have to choose that the quote can not be used.

This will go in as an accuracy grade. If you need to go back and take notes do so now.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

They are all in the yard, then randomly Napoleon,”uttered a high-pitched whimper. Immediately the dogs bounded forward, seized four pigs by the ear and dragged them”(Orwell 82-83)

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

In the text it states … “one of the cows broke in the door of the store shed with her horn and all the animals began to help themselves from the bins.”(Orwell 19)

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

As Clover asks Murial to read over the commandments, Murial says, “It says ‘no animal shall sleep in a bed with sheets’ she announced finally” (Orwell 67).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

Rodriguez uses his own observation of neighborhoods in California to demonstrate that cultural assimilation happens naturally when people live in close proximity: “Culture is fluid…You breathe it. You eat it. You can’t help hearing it” (Rodriguez 409).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

John exhibits his true feelings for Sarah when she finds him “waiting for her door with her favorite flowers and sorrowful expression on his face” (Dow 75).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

The promise of a better life dawned when his father got “a substitute teaching job at a high school” (Johnson 31).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

 First, an unjust action occurs when Napoleon and the pigs are inside the house. “Napoleon decreed that there should be a full investigation into Snowballs activities(Orwell 78)”.

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

In the text it says, “At the meetings snowball often won over the majority by his brilliant speeches” (Orwell 47).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• WE DO NOT USE IN THE TEXT IT SAYS

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

As Rodriguez argues, “The American conversation about favorite color is a debate between blue and purple” (406).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.

Multiple Choice

Which type of quote integration is used?

Thoreau ends his essay with a metaphor: "Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in" (63).

• Rule 1: complete sentence with a colon

• Rule 2: says lead in

• Rule 3: embedded quote

• This quote is not integrated correctly.