Descriptive Details

Descriptive Language

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Descriptive Language

vivid and specific text that helps someone imagine a scene he or she didn't witness; appeals to one or more of the senses (sometimes called sensory details)

Descriptive Language Examples

• Her last smile to me wasn't a sunset. It was an eclipse, the last eclipse, noon dying away to darkness where there would be no dawn.

• My Uber driver looked like a deflating airbag and sounded like talk radio on repeat. The old man was bent into a capital C, his head leaning so far forward that his beard nearly touched his knobby knees.

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• My dog's fur felt like silk against my skin and her black coloring shone, absorbing the sunlight and reflecting it back like a pure, dark mirror.

• The sunset filled the sky with a deep red flame, setting the clouds ablaze.

• The waves rolled along the shore in a graceful, gentle rhythm, as if dancing with the land.

• Winter hit like a welterweight that year, a jabbing cold you thought you could stand until the wind rose up and dropped you to the canvas.

Multiple Choice

Which of these uses descriptive language?

• Sam smiled at me.

• Sam smiled brightly at me.

• Sam's smile lit up the room, basking me in its bright rays.

Multiple Choice

Which of these uses descriptive language?

• There was a colorful sunset tonight.

• Bright oranges, pinks and yellows streaked the sky at sunset.

Examples in Literature

• "She had pewter-colored hair set in a ruthless permanent, a hard beak, and large moist eyes with the sympathetic expression of wet stones."

• "The idiosyncrasy of this town is smoke. It rolls sullenly in slow folds from the great chimneys of the iron-foundries, and settles down in black, slimy pools on the muddy streets. Smoke on the wharves, smoke on the dingy boats, on the yellow river--clinging in a coating of greasy soot to the house-front, the two faded poplars, the faces of the passers-by."

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Examples in Song Lyrics

• "I was born in an empty sea, My tears created oceans

  Producing tsunami waves with emotions

  Patrolling the open seas of an unknown galaxy

  I was floating in front of who I am physically

  Spiritually paralyzing mind body and soul

  It gives me energy when I'm lyrically exercising

  I gotta spit 'til the story is told in a dream by celestial bodies"

• "Blank face in the windowpane

  Made clear in seconds of light

  Disappears and returns again

  Counting hours, searching the night"

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Descriptive Language often includes Figurative Language

• Metaphor - comparison of 2 unlike things

• Simile - comparison using like or as

• Personification - giving human qualities to animals or objects

• Onomatopoeia - words that imitate sound

• Hyperbole - extreme exaggeration

Multiple Choice

Which is an example of metaphor?

• All the world's a stage.

• Life is like a box of chocolates.

• The bees buzzed noisily nearby.

• The students melted in the afternoon heat.

Multiple Choice

Which is an example of onomatopoeia?

• All the world's a stage.

• Life is like a box of chocolates.

• The bees buzzed noisily nearby.

• The students melted in the afternoon heat.

Multiple Choice

Which is an example of hyperbole?

• All the world's a stage.

• Life is like a box of chocolates.

• The bees buzzed noisily nearby.

• The students melted in the afternoon heat.

Multiple Choice

Which is an example of simile?

• All the world's a stage.

• Life is like a box of chocolates.

• The bees buzzed noisily nearby.

• The students melted in the afternoon heat.