MAR21 Revising

Multiple Choice

What is a synonym of the word supplies?

• a . takes

• b. hides

• c. wants

• d. gives

Multiple Choice

What is a synonym of the word clever?

• a. tired

• b. smart

• c. rude

• d. hasty

Multiple Choice

What revision, if any, should be made in sentence 13?

• A. It was night after night,

• B. Night after night, coming back is what he kept doing.

• C. It was night after night of coming back, and he just kept coming.

• D. No change is needed

Multiple Choice

Sentence 36 contains repeated information. What is the best way to revise this sentence?

• A. She studies the local human society website every night now.

• B. She studies the local human society to now look at it every night

• C. She looks at it every night now, the local human society website.

• D. She studies the local human society website and looks at it every night now.

Multiple Choice

What is the best way to revise sentence 2?

• A. In 1886, the Statue of Liberty was from France a gift

• B. The Statue of Liberty was a gift from France in 1886.

• C. The Statue of Liberty in 1886 was a gift from France.

• D. No revision should be made in this sentence.

Multiple Choice

Andre has not used the BEST choice of words in sentence 1. Which phrase should replace a wizard in this sentence?

• A. a teacher

• B. a gardener

• C. an expert

• D. an apprentice

Multiple Choice

What are the main benefits of growing plants in a greenhouse?  What is the power word?  Did you annotate it?  Look in the text.

• A. A lower water usage and cheaper maintenance costs

• B. Protection from weather and pests, leading to healthier growth

• C. Faster growing plants that require less care

• D. More colorful flowers and larger vegetables

Multiple Choice

Andre has included an extraneous sentence in the first paragraph (sentences 1-10). Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?

• A. Sentence 3

• B. Sentence 4

• C. Sentence 5

• D. Sentence 9

Multiple Choice

Sentence 11 contains repeated information. What is the BEST way to revise this sentence?   Strategy – look at the sentence 10 what information are they repeating in sentence 11 that does not need to be there?

• A. On cool or cloudy days, we can turn themselves on.

• B. On cool or cloudy days, we can turn the warming lights on.

• C. For light on cool or cloudy days, we can turn the warming lights for light.

• D. On cool or cloudy days, we can turn the warming lights.