RACE- Organizing your writing

​Organize the writing

By Malak Ali - Unknown Location 3 (UNKN3)

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Happy.

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• My heart was happy when I got a new puppy.

• Last summer my parents brought him home in a big box to surprise me.

• This made me feel excited because I always wanted a dog.

• I named him Rex and played with him everyday.

• That is why my heart felt so happy and I still smile when I think about it.

  
  

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Happy.

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• My heart was happy when my friends came over the weekend.

• I was as happy as a singing bird.

• Playing and spending time together was so much fun!

• We made pizza together, watched Despicable Me 2, and played outside with our bikes.

• That is why my heart felt so happy that day, since I got to do my favourite things with my favourite people.

  
  

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Sad.

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• My heart was sad when I left my extended family and came back to Canada.

• I love being with my cousins, aunts and uncles, because I enjoy hanging out with them and making connections.

• I get to do all kinds of things with them like celebrating holidays, weddings and even just family gatherings.

• That is why I felt so sad about leaving them, but I'm hoping to visit soon.

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Sad.

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• My heart was sad when my favorite toy broke.

• One time this happened was when I dropped my red car and the wheel came off!

• This made me feel upset because it was a special gift.

• That is why I felt so sad about my broken toy.

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Disgusted.

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• My heart felt disgusted when I smelled rotten milk.

• One time this happened was when I opened the carton and it smelled sour.

• This made me feel sick because the smell was so bad like a dead fish.

• That is why I felt disgusted and had to pour it out.

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