Oliver's First Night

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change took to take
• Insert a comma after pen
• Change there to their
• No change should be made

What is the correct way to write sentences 11 and 12?

• While the people went upstairs, Oliver was left to sleep downstairs in the basement.
• The people went upstairs, and Oliver was left.  To sleep downstairs in the basement.
• The people went upstairs, Oliver was left to sleep downstairs in the basement.
• 11 and 12 are written correctly in the story.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 20?

• Change Olivers to Oliver's
• Change stood up to standed up
• Change on his head to they were on his head
• No change should be made

How should sentence 30 be changed?

• Change striped to stripped
• Change said to says
• Delete the quotation marks after the period
• The sentence should not be changed.

What is the correct way to write sentence 33?

• The shrimp swam after the clown fish. The coral cheering and waving its arms wildly.
• The shrimp swam after the clown fish, and the coral cheered, it waved its arms wildly.
• The shrimp swam after the low fish, and the coral cheered.  Waving its arms wildly.
• The shrimp swam after the clown fish.  The coral cheered, waving its arms wildly.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 41?

• Delete he
• Change glansed to glanced
• Insert a comma after friends
• Sentence 41 should not be changed.

How should sentence 45 be changed?

• Delete the comma after Mom
• Change Dad to dad
• Change was to were
• No change should be made.