What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence: They don't usually let humans get very close to them and they travel in places too dense for wildlife photographers to go.

Change places too dense to places to dense

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence: His cinematographers wasn't having much luck getting footage of the big cats.

Change wasn't having to weren't having

What change should be made in the following sentence: One day, while watching some elephants at the campsite, Downer has an idea.

Change while watching to he was watching

Delete the comma after campsite

What change should be made in the following sentence: Other elephants carried smaller cameras that hooked right over the elephants tusks.

Change elephants tusks to elephants' tusks

What change needs to be made in the following sentence: The images that the elephant cameras had captured were impressive, no human cinematographer could have captured such realistic footage.

Change the comma to a semicolon

What is the correct way to write the following sentence: Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams while deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. Deer standing still and allowing the cameras to film them.

Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. While deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

What change should be made to the following sentence: "But now," he added, "It seems the most natural thing in the world."

Change the comma after added to a period

No change should be made in sentence 25.

Revising and Editing 7th

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

What is the best way to revise this sentence: A famous basketball player carried the Chinese flag named Yao Ming.

A famous basketball player named Yao Ming carried the Chinese flag.

The famous basketball player who carried the Chinese flag, he was named Yao Ming.

A famous basketball player carried the Chinese flag he was named Yao Ming.

A famous basketball player carried the Chinese flag. Who was named Yao Ming.

Which sentence could be added after sentence 8 to strengthen the introduction to this paper?

He was a great kid.

He was in school.

He was a national hero.

He was exceptionally cute.

3.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

Where is the BEST place for Nina to insert the following sentence:
Then, despite his own injuries, Hao went back into the ruins.

After sentence 9.

After sentence 10.

After sentence 12.

After sentence 14.

4.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

The word because does not appropriately connect the two clauses in sentence 17. Which word should replace the word because?

if

while

although

where

5.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

Which sentence in the fourth paragraph (sentences 18-22) should be deleted?

Sentence 18

Sentence 19

Sentence 20

Sentence 22

6.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

5 mins • 1 pt

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 27 to help conclude this paper?

Now

Later

In comparison

Furthermore

7.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

What's the secret identity of Bruce Wayne?

Superman

Batman

Ironman

Spiderman

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Revising and Editing 7th

15 questions

What is the best way to revise this sentence: A famous basketball player carried the Chinese flag named Yao Ming.

Which sentence could be added after sentence 8 to strengthen the introduction to this paper?

Where is the BEST place for Nina to insert the following sentence:Then, despite his own injuries, Hao went back into the ruins.

The word because does not appropriately connect the two clauses in sentence 17. Which word should replace the word because?

Which sentence in the fourth paragraph (sentences 18-22) should be deleted?

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 27 to help conclude this paper?

What's the secret identity of Bruce Wayne?

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence:They don't usually let humans get very close to them and they travel in places too dense for wildlife photographers to go.

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence:His cinematographers wasn't having much luck getting footage of the big cats.

What change should be made in the following sentence:One day, while watching some elephants at the campsite, Downer has an idea.

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Where is the BEST place for Nina to insert the following sentence:
Then, despite his own injuries, Hao went back into the ruins.

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence:
They don't usually let humans get very close to them and they travel in places too dense for wildlife photographers to go.

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence:
His cinematographers wasn't having much luck getting footage of the big cats.

What change should be made in the following sentence:
One day, while watching some elephants at the campsite, Downer has an idea.