Editing, Revising, Adding Life

How do author's add life to what they write?

• They write about exciting topics. 
• They focus on word choice and strong sensory details.  
• They use a lot of exclamation marks. 
• They write in first person. 

How do I correct this sentence: The Geography of Coffee Land is AMAZING! 

• Change the ! to a .
• Fix errors in capitalization.
• Rearrange the words. 

What does ARMS stand for in revising?

• Add, remove, move, substitute
• Add, revise, move, simple
• Add, remove, move, summarize

What does CUPS stand for?

• Capitalization, uppercase, period, spelling
• Capitalization, usage, periods, scenery
• Capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling

Which sentence below is correct?

• The island of Dolphins, is a fun, place to visit. 
• Come to my land, where you can experience candy rain and popcorn snow!
• Monkey land is the best place to spend your next vacation. 

Which sentence below has a mistake?

• One of the only thing you can't do is hurt others. 
• Make sure you do not drink all of the soda from Soda Mountain! 
• There is a lot to do there. 

Find the error in the following sentence. Like Mud boggin lake, only Fords can go mud boggin. 

• Capitalization
• Punctuation
• Spelling

Find the error in the following sentence. The languages we speak is basketball. 

• Capitalization
• Punctuation
• Subject verb agreement
• Spelling

Find the error in the following sentence. Want music for less than 5$ better go to MusicVille. 

• Capitalization
• Spelling
• Punctuation
• Subject verb agreement

What would be the best way to correct the word choice in this sentence? The land is full of fun. 

• The land is full of stuff. 
• The land if full of exciting adventures. 
• The land has a lot of fun things. 
• The land is full of a lot of fun adventures.