Revise and Edit Review 1

What is the BEST way to revise the following sentence?
My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals and warned me.

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.
• My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.
• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me.
• My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of the second sentence?
Subway Cat and I never got very close to each other after that. Over time we formed a sort of friendship. I would stare at him. He would stare at me.

• Yet
• In the same way
• For example
• Therefore

What is the BEST way to combine the following 2 sentences?
He turned his golden eyes toward me. He almost looked embarrassed.

• He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed.
• When he turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.
• Turning his golden eyes toward me, which almost looked embarrassed.
• He turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.

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What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
When it was time to add the sugar, I grabed a canister that was full of something white.

• Delete the comma
• Change grabed to grabbed
• Change that to it
• No change should be made.

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
Grinning from ear to ear, we brought are gift to Mom.

• Change Grinning to Grining
• Change brought to brung
• Change are to our
• No change should be made.