Revise and Edit Review 2

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
Mom, Chloe, and me all looked at one another.

• Delete the comma after Mom
• Change me to I
• Change looked to looking
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.1.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
First, if your going to cook, you need to pay attention to the ingredients.

• Change your to you’re
• Change attention to atention
• Change ingredients to ingredient’s
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
This can save you a lot of embarrassment later.

• Change This to Which
• Change save to safe
• Change later to latter
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
Mom’s birthday present didn’t turn out as we had planned but she knew that we loved her.

• Insert a comma after planned
• Delete but
• Change she knew to they knew
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write the following sentences?
Besides, I don’t think we would have laughed nearly as hard. If our cookies had been just perfect.

• Besides, I don’t think we would have laughed nearly as hard if our cookies had been just perfect.
• Besides, I don’t think. That we would have laughed nearly as hard if our cookies had been just perfect.
• Besides, I don’t think that we would have. Laughed nearly as hard if our cookies had been just perfect.
• The sentences are written correctly.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E