Revise and Edit Review 3

Tom wants to use a more accurate word than living in the following sentence. Which of the following could BEST replace this word?
A bookmobile is a mobile library usually found in a vehicle such as a van or a truck. Bookmobiles travel around, offering books to people who live far away from public libraries. Bookmobiles have been living in the United States for more than 100 years.

• showing
• coming
• offering
• operating

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CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.K.1B

What is the BEST way to revise the following sentence?
The excited children wait excitedly for Soriano to come.

• The children wait excitedly for Soriano to come.
• The children wait excitedly. For Soriano to come.
• The children are excited, they wait excitedly for Soriano to come.
• The children who are excited wait excitedly for Soriano to come.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

How should the following sentence be changed?
I was so bad that I figured the Coach wouldn’t care if I got bored at practice and lay down in the outfield.

• Change Coach to coach
• Change bored to borred
• Insert a comma after practice
• The sentence should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change needs to be made in the following sentence?
I was sure that with a little more practice, I would be catching and throwing just as good as Stan does.

• Change little to littel
• Change the comma to a period
• Insert a comma after catching
• Change good to well

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write the following sentence?
I wanted to take it off, my dad kept telling me that I would get used to it.

• I wanted to take it off my dad. Who kept telling me that I would get used to it.
• I wanted to take it off, and my dad kept telling me. That I would get used to it.
• I wanted to take it off, but my dad kept telling me that I would get used to it.
• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E