That dog chased Ellie all the way from the playground, into the school building.

Change playground to play ground

My family watches the Macy's Thanksgiving day parade together every year.

Change day parade to Day Parade

Madison waved to her classmates as she rolled down the hallway on the janitors cart.

Insert a comma after classmates

What is the best way to combine the two sentences? Victoria was nervous. She had never sung in front of anyone.

Victoria was nervous because she had never sung in front of anyone.

Victoria was nervous in front of everyone because she had never sung.

If Victoria was nervous, she had never sung in front of anyone.

Victoria was nervous she had never sung in front of anyone.

What is the best way to combine the two sentences? They are very comfortable. They are extremely useful.

They are very comfortable and extremely useful.

They are very comfortable they are extremely useful.

They are very comfortable, and they are extremely useful.

Very comfortable and extremely useful they are.

What is the best way to combine the two sentences? Matthew's stomach was growling. He ate the sandwich with a smile.

Since Matthew's stomach was growling, he ate the sandwich with a smile.

Matthew's stomach was growling because he ate the sandwich with a smile.

Matthew's stomach was growling he ate the sandwich with a smile.

As Matthew's stomach was growling, and ate the sandwich with a smile.

"Can I go to Esther's house," I asked my mom, hoping she would let me.

Change the comma after house to a question mark

What is the most effective way to revise this sentence? The chair began to topple over my friends rushed toward me.

The chair began to topple over, and my friends rushed toward me.

Although the chair began to topple over my friends rushed toward me.

As my friends rushed toward the chair, I began to topple over.

The chair, my friends rushing toward me, toppled over.

What is the best way to combine the two sentences? She walked toward the door. Chills ran down her spine.

As she walked toward the door, chills ran down her spine.

She walked toward the door chills ran down her spine.

Because she walked toward the door, chills ran down her spine.

She walked toward the door, or chills ran down her spine.

What is the best way to revise this sentence? William ran into the house, then he yelled to his mom, "I'm home!"

William ran into the house, and then he yelled to his mom, "I'm home!"

William ran into the house, he yelled to his mom, "I'm home!"

William, when he ran into the house, he yelled to his mom, "I'm home!"

The sentence is written correctly.

What is the best way to revise this sentence? If you stir the mixture too long in it you will find that it is very thick.

If you stir the mixture too long, you will find it is very thick.

Stirring the mixture too long, in it you will find it is too thick.

The mixture is too thick you will find if you stir the mixture too long.

The sentence is written correctly.

Issac said "Can you sharpen my pencil, please?"

Delete the quotation marks at the end of the sentence

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

Change friend's to friends

Change bikes to bike's

Change their to they're

This sentence does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2D

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

How does this sentence need to be changed?
Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

Change friend's to friends

Change bikes to bike's

Change their to they're

This sentence does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

I don't know if your going to like the gift I brought you.

Change your to you're

Change know to no

Change brought to brang

No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

When the bunnies realized what was going on, they ran to there grandma's house.

Change grandma's to Grandma's

Change bunnies to bunnys

Change there to their

No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

The Sophianburg Museum was the most coolest field trip we ever attended.

Change most coolest to coolest.

Change Museum to museum

Change attended to attend

No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

When the car stoped, Jacie got out and walked towards the beach.

Delete the comma.

Change walked to walkked

Change stoped to stopped

No change needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

3 mins • 1 pt

Tristan looked at his watch gasped, and ran into the movies to meet his friends.

Change ran to was running

Insert a comma after watch

Change meet to meat

No change should be made

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

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Revising/Editing Practice

Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

How does this sentence need to be changed?
Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

I don't know if your going to like the gift I brought you.

When the bunnies realized what was going on, they ran to there grandma's house.

The Sophianburg Museum was the most coolest field trip we ever attended.

When the car stoped, Jacie got out and walked towards the beach.

Tristan looked at his watch gasped, and ran into the movies to meet his friends.

The two girls skipped happily down the hall, waiting for the fun to begin.

The oven beeped after 45 minutes, signaling the cake was ready to be taken out.

That dog chased Ellie all the way from the playground, into the school building.

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Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

How does this sentence need to be changed?Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.

I don't know if your going to like the gift I brought you.

When the bunnies realized what was going on, they ran to there grandma's house.

The Sophianburg Museum was the most coolest field trip we ever attended.

When the car stoped, Jacie got out and walked towards the beach.

Tristan looked at his watch gasped, and ran into the movies to meet his friends.

The two girls skipped happily down the hall, waiting for the fun to begin.

The oven beeped after 45 minutes, signaling the cake was ready to be taken out.

That dog chased Ellie all the way from the playground, into the school building.

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How does this sentence need to be changed?
Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest.