Revising and Editing

Things have been realy busy around here. 

• Change realy to really
• Change busy to buzy
• change here to hear
• Make No change

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CCSS.L.3.1G

I'll call you soon, and we can have the bestest talk ever!

• Change you to they
• Change soon to sooner
• Change bestest to most best
• Change bestest to best

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CCSS.L.3.1G

The eight musicians, including someone who played both the clarinet and the trumpet.
The meaning of the sentence can be improved by changing they to:

• My parents
• Someone
• Them
• The band

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

The first place I would go is the great pyramids.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

• Change first to First
• Change great to grate
• Change great pyramids to Great Pyramids
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

It is incredible to beleive that these huge pyramids were built thousands and thousands of years ago.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence.

• Change incredible to increduble
• change beleive to believe
• Change these to theese
• Change thousands to thousand

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Just like mice, bats have fur, ears a nose, and a mouth with sharp, tiny teeth.

• Add a comma after ears
• take out the comma after sharp
• change teeth to thooths
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

You can see all sorts of wild animals when you ride a boat on the nile.

• Change see to saw
• Change sorts to sort
• Change nile to Nile
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.K.1B

I have a friend who went to Alaska and watched the iditerod.
What change should be made?

• Change friend to Friend
• Change iditerod to Iditerod
• Place a comma after have
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

When I was 14, dad took me to Six Flags.
What change should be made to this sentence?

• change dad to Dad
• Change Six Flags to six Flags
• remove the comma after week
• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

The sounds bounce off things in front of them and goes back to the bats' ears like echos.

• Add a comma after them
• Change goes to go
• Change bats' to bats
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A