What is the BEST way to rewrite this sentence? When she graduated and got her pilot's license, Bessie became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.

Bessie graduated and became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.

She was the first licensed African-American pilot in the world when she graduated.

Bessie graduated, and got her pilot's license, and became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.

When she graduated and got her pilot's license. Bessie became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

"But you're not going to be shooting at that baby height this year.

insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence

change you're to your

change height to higt

make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

I feeled like a balloon that had just been popped.

change popped to poped

change balloon to baloon

change feeled to felt

Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.3.1D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

I threw my whole body into it, but the ball just skimed the net.

change threw to through

change whole to hole

change skimed to skimmed

make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

What is the best way to revise this sentence?
They peck away at the food, and they use their strong little jaws to crack their food open.

They peck away at the food. They use their strong little jaws to crack their food open.

They crack open their food by pecking at it with their strong little jaws.

They peck and crack their food with their strong little jaws.

They peck away with their strong little jaws and crack their food open.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

This gives them the power to pull meat off of their prey.

change meat to meet

change their to they're

change prey to pray

make no change

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

for example, red cardinals has a short, hard beak that they use to break open seeds and nuts.

change cardinals to cardinal

change has to have

change break to brake

make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

They use their beaks like drills to bore wholes into trees to find food.

change drills to drilles

change bore to boar

change wholes to holes

make no change

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CCSS.L.2.1B

CCSS.L.3.1B

CCSS.L.K.1C

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"But you're not going to be shooting at that baby height this year.

I feeled like a balloon that had just been popped.

I threw my whole body into it, but the ball just skimed the net.

What is the best way to revise this sentence?They peck away at the food, and they use their strong little jaws to crack their food open.

This gives them the power to pull meat off of their prey.

for example, red cardinals has a short, hard beak that they use to break open seeds and nuts.

They use their beaks like drills to bore wholes into trees to find food.

What is the BEST way to rewrite this sentence?When she graduated and got her pilot's license, Bessie became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.

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What is the best way to revise this sentence?
They peck away at the food, and they use their strong little jaws to crack their food open.

What is the BEST way to rewrite this sentence?
When she graduated and got her pilot's license, Bessie became the first licensed African-American pilot in the world.