Editing Sentences 2 (Garloch)

What is the best way to rewrite these sentences? Sarah was great at math. Sarah was not very good at writing. 

• Sarah was great at math but she was not. Very good at writing. 
• Sarah was great at math. But not good at writing. 
• Sarah was great at math, but she was not very good at writing. 
• Sarah was great at math but she was not very good at writing. 

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CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change if any should be made to this sentence?
"Can we go to the park later today? asked Todd. 

• Change the question mark to a period
• Changed asked to Asked
• Insert quotation marks after today
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What change if any should be made to this sentence?
The teacher said to the class, I hope they're having a good time today."

• Change they're to their
• Insert quotation marks after class
• Delete the comma after class
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What change if any should be made to this sentence? 
"I really hope you can come to my party this weekend," Said Peggy. 

• Change the comma to a period after weekend
• Change Said to said
• Insert a comma after party
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.
• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.
• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.
• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

It is time to give the dog ______ bath.

• It's
• Its

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change should be made?
He then climbed inside the canoe he made his way across the lake.

• A) He then climbed inside the canoe and made his way. Across a lake.
• B) He then climbed inside the canoe. And he made his way across the lake.
• C) He then climbed inside the canoe, and made his way across the lake.

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CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What correction should be made to this sentence?
She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.

• A) change went to go
• B) change swim team to Swim Team
• C) change olympics to Olympics
• D) make no change

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

Melanie forgot her lunch. She called her mother.
Combine the sentences.

• A) Melanie forgot her lunch because she called her mother.
• B) Melanie forgot her lunch, so she called her mother.
• C) Melanie forgot. Her lunch and called her mother.
• D) Melanie forgot her lunch so she called. Her mother.

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

Janet skated onto the pond. She made a perfect figure eight.
How do we combine the sentences?

• A) Janet skated onto the pond, but she made a perfect figure eight.
• B) Janet skated onto the pond, and she made a perfect figure eight.
• C) Janet skated onto the pond, so made a perfect figure eight.

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A