Revise & Edit.1

^4.3 Which transition word could BEST be added to this sentence:
Tenley returned to skating and won her first competition that same year.

• Before
• Today
• Soon
• Yesterday

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

^1.3 What is the BEST way to revise this sentence?
in Newton Center, Massachusetts, Tenley Albright was born in 1935.

• Tenley Albright was born in 1935 in Newton Center, Massachusetts.
• In 1935, in Newton Center, Massachusetts, Tenley Albright was born.
• Tenley Albright, in 1935, was born in Newton Center, Massachusetts.
• Tenley Albright was born in Newton Center, Massachusetts. She was born in 1935.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

^5.3 Which sentence could best follow this sentence: Just weeks before the 1956 competition, she fell on the ice and was injured by the blade on her skate.

• Tenley Albright had to buy new skates before she could compete in the Olympics.
• Tenley Albright soon became a famous surgeon because of her injury.
• In spite of her injury, Tenley Albright skated to win an Olympic gold medal.
• Because her father was a surgeon, Tenley Albright healed quickly.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1D

^6.3 What is the best way to combine these sentences: She successfully completed medical school. She became a surgeon at a Boston hospital.

• Before she completed medical school, she became a surgeon at a Boston hospital.
• She successfully completed medical school and became a surgeon at a Boston hospital.
• She became a surgeon at a Boston hospital and then completed medical school.
• She successfully completed medical school because she became a surgeon at a Boston hospital.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

^7.3 What change should be made in this sentence: When I pounce in front of him, he questions, "Where were you?

• Change he to He
• Change the comma after "questions" to a period
• Insert quotation marks after the question mark
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

^8.3 What change, if any, should be made to this sentence: I think to myself, "why haven't I noticed the tree house before?"

• Change myself to meself
• Change why to Why 
• Change haven't to have'nt
• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

^9.3 Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of this sentence: On my list are paints, paintbrushes, water, and paper.

• Suddenly
• Of course
• Later
• Such as

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

^10.3 What is the correct way to write this sentence: An image is painting itself in my mind and i need to capture it.

• An image is painting itself. In my mind I need to capture it.
• Because an image is painting itself in my mind and I need to capture it.
• An image is painting itself in my mind, and I need to capture it.
• This sentence is written correctly.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

^11.3 What change, if any, should be made to this sentence: I knew I will tell Mama about my secret tree house someday, but for now it is mine and only mine.

• Change knew to know
• Change Mama to mama
• Delete the comma after someday
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

^12.3 What change, if any, should be made to this sentence: Mama ruffles my hair and grin as I slide past her.

• Change hair to hare
• Change grin to grins
• Change past to passed
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D