Editing CUPS Station 1

(13) We will work hard so we can play hard after STAAR.
What change, if any, should be made to sentence 13?

• Change the period to a question mark.
• Change play to pley
• Add a comma after hard.
• No change is necessary.

(1) Over the summer my family took a vacation to New York city. 
What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Change took to had took
• Insert a comma after vacation
• Change city to City
• No change should be made.

(5) What could be a more perfect present.
How should sentence 5 be changed? 

• Change more perfect to perfecter
• Change the period to a question mark
• Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence
• Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence

(9) She arrived in the United States in 350 different piece’s.
What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Change She to They
• Change in 350 to she was in 350 
• Change piece’s to pieces
• No change should be made in sentence 9.

(15) The French people were very proud of the help they had given the United States during the revolutionary war.
What change should be made in sentence 15?

• Change French to french
• Change were to was
• Change they to it
• Change revolutionary war to Revolutionary War

(18) In 1886 she was our country’s most tallest structure.
What change needs to be made in sentence 18?

• Change In 1886 to It was in 1886
• Change country’s to countries
• Change country’s to countries
• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

(21) Many people beleive that the rays of her crown represent the seven oceans and seven continents of the world.
How does sentence 21 need to be changed?

• Change beleive to believe
• Change rays to ray’s
• Insert a comma after oceans
• Sentence 21 does not need to be changed.

(2) Zoey the sea turtle lumbered forward, not quiet used to the heavy weight of her shell out of the water.
What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

• Change lumbered to lumbering
• Change not to she was not
• Change quiet to quite
• No change needs to be made in sentence 2.

(6) As Zoey draged herself up the shore and away from the ocean, she felt the dry and grainy sand on her flippers. 
What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Delete As
• Change draged to dragged
• Change felt to feeled 
• Insert a comma after dry

(11) On a warm night a lot like this one, she had poked her foot out of an egg and then pushed the rest of her body threw the shell onto the sand.
How should sentence 11 be changed?

• Change poked to pokked
• Change an egg to a egg
• Change threw to through
• Sentence 11 should not be changed.