Daily Edit 13

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 1?

“Hey Lillie,” the Teacher continued, “tomorrow don’t forget to bring your journals to class.”

• Change Teacher to teacher

• Change journals to journal’s

• Change your to you’re

• A. No change needs to be made

What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

While my dad went to the dry cleaners, my mom and me accidentally locked ourselves out of the house.

• Delete the comma after cleaners and insert a period

• Change dry cleaners to Dry Cleaners

• Change me to I

• Change ourselves to ourselfs

What change needs to be made in sentence 3?

We were less then a mile from the doctor’s office when I announced, “Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself.”

• Change then to than

• Change doctor’s to doctors

• Change Mom to mom

• Change were to was

What is the correct way to write sentence 4?

That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like, I was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. And was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. I was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• That’s what I thought getting glasses would be like. Because I was certain it would be the end of life as I knew it.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 5?

Its necessary to have a good friend in life so we can have trust.

• Change its to it’s

• Change necessary to necesary

• Insert a comma after life

• No change is needed

What change needs to be made in sentence 6?

Although Mack and Cameron had been friends most of their lives, no one had ever expected them to run in high school track meets together.

• Delete the comma after lives

• Change had to have

• Change high school to High School

• Change friends to freinds