Daily Edit 15

What change should be made in the sentence?

When you think of inspirational leaders who changed the world, you may think of people who take a stand firm in their beliefs and whose positivity spreds to those around them.

• Change you may think to they may think

• Change beliefs to belief’s

• Change them to it

• Change spreds to spreads

What is the correct way to write the following sentences?

Slowly we began to crawl. We traveled the same path, but this time I felt different.

• Slowly we began to crawl, we traveled the same path, but this time I felt different.

• Slowly we began to crawl. Traveling the same path, but feeling different this time.

• Slowly we began to crawl, and travel the same path. But feeling different this time.

• Sentences are correct

What change should be made in the sentence?

Even though I appreciate the second semester of school; there aren’t hardly as many holidays as the first semester.

• Change there to their

• Change the semicolon to a comma

• Change appreciate to appreiciate

• Make no change

What is the correct way to write the following sentence?

As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged, it looked as though my first homecoming dance would be a little different.

• As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged. Because it looked as though my first homecoming dance would be a little different.

• As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged. It looked as though my first homecoming dance would be a little different.

• As I watched friends find dates for homecoming. I was initially a little discouraged because it looked as though my first homecoming dance would be a little different.

• Sentence is written correctly.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

During the summer, the kids enjoy going to the park with our mom.

• Change summer to Summer

• Change kids to kids’

• Change our to their

• The sentence should not be changed.

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

For many weeks, the students has been writing expository essays about real-life lessons.

• Delete the comma after weeks

• Change weeks to weeks’

• Change has been to have been

• Change has been to have been written

What is the most effective revision to make in the sentence?

Despite the easy task of the job, the workers weren’t able to complete what their boss instructed them to do.

• Despite the easy task of the job, the workers weren’t able to complete, what their boss instructed them to do.

• Despite the easy task of the job, the workers weren’t able to complete what their boss instructed the workers to do.

• Despite the easy task of job, the workers and their boss weren’t able to complete what they were instructed to do.

• No revision is needed in the sentence.