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"How many are here Dad?" she asked.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence?

• add a comma after here

• change she to She

• change asked to askt

• make no change

"They make a lot of energy for cities in Texas, Sally's dad said.

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence?

• change make to makes

• change cities to citys

• add quotations marks after Texas,

• make no change

Sally looked at the wind turbines wirling in the wind.

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence?

• add a comma after Sally

• change turbines to Turbines

• change wirling to whirling

• make no change

Sally asked, "what is your job out here, Dad?"

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• change what to What

• delete the comma after here

• change the question mark after Dad to an exclamation point

• make no change

She thought about going with him to the coal plant where he worked in Florida, remembering how they always seemed dirty.

• change thought to thouht

• change Florida to florida

• change they to it

• make no change

"It seems as if the electricity made here is more better than at the other place you worked."

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• delete the quotation marks before It

• change more better to better

• insert a comma after place

• make no change

John joined the navy in 1943, during world war II.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• change John to He

• change joined to jined

• change world war II to World War II

• make no change

John spended much of his life trying to help people.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• change spended to spent

• change his to their

• delete the period after people

• make no change

John's experience in the military made him appreshiate how much people in the military helped other Americans.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• add a period after the first in

• change appreshiate to appreciate

• change Americans to americans

• make no change

John then became a professor at Midwestern State University.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• change became to become

• change professor to profesor

• change Midwestern State University to Midwestern state university

• make no change