Revising & Editing

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

• change family to Family

• change I to me

• change river to River

• Make no change.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Mom surprised us all when she announced, "let's all go get pizza!"

• Delete the quotation marks

• Change let's to Let's

• Remove the comma after announced

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

• Change knew to new

• Change thrown to threw

• Change theirselves to themselves

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

Natalies' flower was the most beautiful I had ever seen.

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful

• Change Natalies to Natalie's

• Change flower to flour

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1G

Mrs. James said that our class would go on a field trip on March 2 2015.

• Insert a comma after 2

• Add quotation marks before our and after 2015.

• Change James to james

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

The Pledge of Allegiance is an important part of our monday morning assembly.

• ^{Change important to more important}

• Change an to a

• ^{Change monday to Monday}

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

"I love to read about animals" said Matthew, as he settled down with his new magazine to read.

• Add a period after animals

• Change said to Said

• Add a comma after animals

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

When my Dad handed me the bottle of ketchup, I shook it thoroughly to mix it.

• Change shook to shaked

• Change Dad to dad

• Change bottle to bottel

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1B

CCSS.L.3.1B

CCSS.L.K.1C

At Mariah's school, there are several book's written in Spanish.

• Change book's to books

• Change Spanish to spanish

• Change Mariah's to Mariahs

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project and Liam used paints.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, Liam used paints for the project.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project then Liam used paints for the art project.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E