Diving In: Revise & Editing

What is the correct way to write sentences 15 and 16?

• When he surfaces, he usually has a heavy bag, it is filled with hundreds of golf balls that have mistakenly landed in the pond.

• When he surfaces, he usually has a heavy bag filled with hundreds of golf balls. That have mistakenly landed in the pond.

• When he surfaces, he usually has a heavy bag filled with hundreds of golf balls they have mistakenly landed in the pond.

• When he surfaces, he usually has a heavy bag filled with hundreds of golf balls that have mistakenly landed in the pond.

What change should be made in sentence 18?

• Change a to an

• Change average to averege

• Change can collect to collecting

• No change should be made in sentence 18.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 21?

• Change communities to community’s

• Change requires to require

• Change maintenance to maintanence

• Make no change

How should sentence 24 be changed?

• Change are usually operating to is usually operating

• Delete the comma

• Change they to you

• Sentence 24 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What change needs to be made in sentence 25?

• Change you’re to your

• Insert a comma after diving

• Insert a comma after someday

• Change you may want to to and may want to

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A