Revising and Editing

What is the best transition?

Noodles is an expert with the toy trains. __________, he knows how to make all engines run.

• Next

• Then

• For example

• However

What transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 18?

Casper was running late to work in the toy shop. __________ he didn't get enough toys finished for the day.

• As a result,

• However,

• For example,

• On the other hand,

What transition word or phrase could BEST be added?

Napoleon build fabulous Lego sets. __________ Doomby creates lifelike action figures.

• On the other hand,

• Specifically,

• In fact,

• In order to,

What transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the sentence below.

___________ it would snow that night, Malachi gave the reindeer extra hay for warmth.

• In order to

• For example

• For fear that

• Later in that evening

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

Mrs. Claus bustled around finishing the cookyes, wrapping the gifts, and giving the elfs a snack.

• Change cookyes to cookies

• delete the comma after cookyes

• change gifts to gift's

• no changes need to be made.