Revision for English III

What is the best revision

• Through the internet, anyone can read articles, find videos, look up information, and view YouTube.

• Through the internet, anyone can read articles, and find videos, while they look up information who view YouTube.

• Through the internet, there are many aspects to look at, anyone can read articles, find videos, look up information, and view YouTube.

• Through the internet, anyone can read articles, find videos, looking up information, and YouTube can be viewed.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Which detail should be eliminated?

• Education can improve a person's life

• Mandela believed it to be the only way to change a person.

• Without it, a person's life will not improve.

• Sometimes you can get help by using state agencies.

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CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

CCSS.RL.7.1

CCSS.RL.8.1

Medical facilities are more advanced than medical facilities in olden days. What's a more effective sentence?

• Medical facilities are more advanced than medical facilities in India.

• Medical facilities are more advanced than facilities in centuries before

• Medical facilities are more advanced than hospitals in previous years.

• Medical facilities are more advanced than medical facilities in back in the days of knights and damsels.

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CCSS.L.3.1G

The journey was rugged as they climbed the ancient path. Which sentence should follow this statement?

• The group needed to pack for the long trip.

• High in the mountains, the trail was treacherously steep and people feared falling.

• They were headed for some important archaeological finds in the mountains.

• Finding a river, they filled their canteens with water.

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CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

Students will continue to want to be a professional athlete. Students will have more of a chance of improving their lives through a college education. What is the best combination of these sentences?

• Because students want to be professional athletes, they will improve their lives through a college education.

• By students being a professional athlete, students have a chance of improving their lives through a college education.

• Though students want to be professional athletes, they will have more of a chance of improving their lives with a college education.

• Students will continue to want to be a professional athlete even though students have a chance of improving their lives through a college education.

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CCSS.RL.11-12.9

CCSS.RL.6.3

CCSS.RL.7.3

CCSS.RL.8.3

CCSS.RL.9-10.3

Striving for a college education is better than not trying to reach it at all. What is the better sentence?

• Striving for a college education is better than not trying to reach for a college education at all.

• Striving for a college education is better than not trying to reach for higher levels of learning at all.

• Striving for a college education is better than not trying to reach for professional sports at all.

• Striving for a college education is better than not trying to reach for better grades at all.

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CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

Which is the best revision?

• The ocean is a huge body of water covers most of the earth.

• The ocean a huge body of water that covers most of the earth.

• The ocean, a huge body of water, covers a most of the earth.

• The ocean and huge body of water covers most of the earth

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which is the best revision?

• Like a blanket, the ocean covers the majority of the earth's surface.

• Covering the majority of the earth's surface, the ocean covers like a blanket.

• The ocean, which covers the earth, is like a blanket over the majority of the earth's surface.

• A blanket over the majority of the earth's surface is like an ocean.

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CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

The ocean is full of incredible secrets. Which sentence would best follow this sentence?

• To uncover such mysteries, science explores the various aspects of these water bodies.

• The ocean's secrets would amaze us if we knew what they were.

• The secrets are found deep in the bottom of the ocean.

• Oceans are full of life both in plants, animals, and microbes.

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CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

What's a more effective sentence?

• It is a vast amount of water, such oceans like the Pacific and Atlantic.

• The oceans have incredible secrets that might include ways to cure disease.

• The way to cure disease are part of these incredible oceans.

• Oceans filled with ways to cure diseases these are vast amounts of water.

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CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.11-12.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2