Editing and Revising 1/27/20

What is the best way to combine the following sentences?

The Oak Park initiative to build a new community center was introduced in the summer of 2018. It was not approved until the winter of 2019.

• The Oak Park initiative to build a new community center was introduced in the summer of 2018, nor It was not approved until the winter of 2019.

• The Oak Park initiative to build a new community center was introduced in the summer of 2018, such that it was not approved until the winter of 2019.

• The Oak Park initiative to build a new community center was introduced in the summer of 2018, but it was not approved until the winter of 2019.

• The Oak Park initiative to build a new community center was introduced in the summer of 2018, even if it was not approved until the winter of 2019.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.1.1J

What is the best way to combine the following sentences?

The rights outlined in the First Amendment are the foundation of our freedoms of speech and religion. These rights apply to all citizens of the United States.

• The rights outlined in the First Amendment are the foundation of our freedoms of speech and religion., yet they apply to all citizens of the United States.

• The rights outlined in the First Amendment are the foundation of our freedoms of speech and religion, although they apply to all citizens of the United States.

• The rights outlined in the First Amendment are the foundation of our freedoms of speech and religion, whereas they rights apply to all citizens of the United States.

• The rights outlined in the First Amendment are the foundation of our freedoms of speech and religion, and they apply to all citizens of the United States.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

What is the best way to combine the following sentences?

The Bill of Rights is designed to provide all citizens equal rights. Lawyers ensure citizens are represented fairly.

• The Bill of Rights is designed to provide all citizens equal rights, and lawyers ensure citizens are represented fairly.

• The Bill of Rights is designed to provide all citizens equal rights, nor lawyers ensure citizens are represented fairly.

• The Bill of Rights is designed to provide all citizens equal rights, although lawyers ensure citizens are represented fairly.

• The Bill of Rights is designed to provide all citizens equal rights, if lawyers ensure citizens are represented fairly.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.1.1J

What is the best way to combine the following sentences?

Previous court cases lay the foundation for decisions made in the future. It is important for students to learn about these.

• Previous court cases lay the foundation for decisions made in the future, even though it is important for students to learn about these.

• Previous court cases lay the foundation for decisions made in the future, but it is important for students to learn about these.

• Previous court cases lay the foundation for decisions made in the future, and it is important for students to learn about these.

• Previous court cases lay the foundation for decisions made in the future, such that it is important for students to learn about these.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.1.1J

What is the best way to combine the following sentences?

Teachers of reading bursted with pride when they saw students' reading scores. They wish they could celebrate with a class trip to Paris!

• Teachers of reading bursted with pride when they saw students' reading scores, although they wish they could celebrate with a class trip to Paris!

• Teachers of reading bursted with pride when they saw students' reading scores, even though they wish they could celebrate with a class trip to Paris!

• Teachers of reading bursted with pride when they saw students' reading scores, nor they wish they could celebrate with a class trip to Paris!

• Teachers of reading bursted with pride when they saw students' reading scores, and they wish they could celebrate with a class trip to Paris!

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

Which transition word or phrase BEST completes the sentence?

______________ OPRF students, they would prefer going to school year round in order to get as much learning done as possible.

• Provided that

• Finally

• Although

• According to

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

Which transition word or phrase BEST completes the sentence?

________________ the movie, the reading class would always rather read their independent books than watch one.

• In other words

• Regardless of

• For this reason

• In contrast

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

Which transition word or phrase BEST completes the sentence?

__________________ to Softwareland, free time was the students most memorable time in reading class.

• In addition

• Surprisingly

• During

• Even though

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

"We will go to the park on Saturday" she promised.

• "We will go to the park on saturday" she promised.

• "We will go to the park on Saturday," she promised.

• "We will go to the park on Saturday" She promised.

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

Jacky her best friend plays soccer after school each day.

• Jacky her best friend. Plays soccer after school each day.

• Jacky, her best friend plays soccer after school each day.

• Jacky, her best friend, plays soccer after school each day.

• Make no change

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A