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What change should be made to the sentence?

The dog ran across the street and the cat chased him down the sidewalk.

• change dog to Dog

• change him to He

• Insert a comma after street

• Change sidewalk to side walk

What is the correct way to write the sentence?

Susie took one last look at the dusty hill, then the water carried her away again.

• Susie taking one last look at the dusty hill. Then the water carried her away again.

• Susie took one last look at the dusty hill. Before the water carried her away again.

• Susie taking one last look at the dusty hill, and then the water carrying her away again.

• Susie took one last look at the dusty hill before the water carried her away again.

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

When Susies house was complete, she laid her bricks.

• Delete When

• Change Susies to Susie's

• Change laid to lays

• Make no change

What change needs to be made in the sentence ?

Bobby found a dry spot at the pool and began doing homework.

• Change found to finds

• Change began to begun

• Change a to an

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

What change should be made in the sentence?

Gina spent the next sevaral hours far out in the beach waters.

• Change sevaral to several

• Change far to she was far

• Change waters to water’s

• Change the period to a comma

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

Upon reaching the front of the school, the dog dashes furiously.

• Change reaching to reeching

• Change dashes to dashed

• Change furiously to furious

• No change needs to be made.

How should the sentence be changed?

Ms. Rico poked her head out of a door and then pushed the desk threw the doorway.

• Change poked to pokked

• Change a door to an door

• Change threw to through

• Make no change

What change should be made in the sentence?

As Ms. Brown draged herself down the hallways, she felt the pain in her sides throbbing.

• Delete As

• Change draged to dragged

• Change felt to feeled

• Insert a comma after dry

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

Frankie the elephant lumbered forward, not quiet used to the heavy weight of her feet out of the water

• Change lumbered to lumbering

• Change not to he was not

• Change quiet to quite

• No change needs to be made